This was a beautiful story. I loved it. Absolutely loved it. Like a modern Romeo And Juliet.

WOW i absolutely loved this story! I do hope you write some more sometime :D keep up the great writing! ;)

hmm.. i love this!

keep writhin

Wow. There was really something beautifully and eerily romantic about this. I truly enjoyed it. Almost gave me chills.

i like this alot...and i personally like the ending the way it is, so im glad u havent added anything to it yet...its happy and tragic...nice

I like this! it very nice

very interesting... very different... but interesting...

...wow...that is really cool. I am terrible at descriptions, but you sure aren't.

Huh, that was pretty good. I liked the description, especially about staring at the moon, and the ending was good.

This was excellent! It had such a sweet ending in a tragic way. Especially after he says 'never say that again', it really...it worked.

Harlequin~Please fix me...

ohh...this is good!! you should definantly write more! I want to know what happens next!

awesome work! keep it up!

very sad

wow- very very impressed, all your writings are true, meaningful, and make ppl think. this piece, if i had to chose, is my fav. its so beautifully written and will stay in my mind forever, this has got to be one of the best things i've read on fictionpress

A bit confusing, but also seems to contain an inner message or being of some sort. Quite sad.