wow just wow, I really felt this one.

Truly amazing. Wonderfully horrific. Keep up the good work!

Wow. Powerful piece of work, with a character you almost brought to life with words alone. I especially like the lines 'And as he sits upon his great throne of stone, High upon the building of pain'. Awesome, just awesome. Keep up the good work!

*Shivers* I could feel the emotion in that. It was really good!

hauntingly beautiful! great job!!

Yay! This was very well written, and I'm very impressed. Great choice for words. It seems to me you really captured the emotions of an old vampire. It made me think of something that would be from Anne Rice. Great job!

that was pretty and sad at the same time. well done.

Wow that is a beautiful poem, I get the feeling that it must not be so fun living for an eternity.

sad and painful... life isn't life when there is no death, is it? great imagery and inner conflict

~birdytamel~

beautifully written! so sad and tragic but wonderful all the same. Very creative!

*SW*

Thank you for your review on "A Stolen Life". I'm glad that you liked it! =)