Reviews for Paradise for Sale!

Dveyoni 2005-06-15 ch 1,	I love it ( as usual)
TrueToMyself 2005-04-01 ch 1,	I'm not sure why, but this really made me smile! Keep writing, TTM
Nobody-n-Particular 2005-03-26 ch 1,	I really like the last two lines. Quite nice.
gatito maniaco 2005-03-26 ch 1,	really imaginative! Its interesting how someone could an aprtment ad into poetry
and calliope said 2005-03-26 ch 1,	Beautiful imagery! The last line is cynical and depressing. ^-^ I feel that's the point though. Paradise for fifty bucks a day, sheesh. Love the theme.Kudos!
Sekhmet Johnson 2005-03-25 ch 1,	Nicely DONE! -getting repetitive, is sunnee- Sounds very descriptive right up to the last two lines, which sound like something I can hear coming from an advertiser's mouth. Write on!
Thementalmeow 2005-03-24 ch 1,	lol I actually like it. The words work well together and the ending is funny. It's very good for a poetry like advertisement.