Deeply emotional, saddening.

A Smashing Pumpkin fan eh? Nicely done. Most people don't have the same respect for masochism as I do. Continue on only if you have the will to survive.

well, i've already told you what i think about this one, but i'll say it again. I absolutely love it! I'm surprised you did not post it earlier well, now that is it up it's going on my favies. Brava! Brilliant job!

~Hip

Hi! Somehow, I came across your poem and this one sounded really interested... There's so much emotions that flow well throughout the verses... I think it would have been a lot better if you described how the blood was in more details... I hope you didn't take that personally :D This poem is really good though...

- If want more reviews, I think it's better to let people sign in anonymously as well :P

- Serene