haha. that was so funny. :) sick twisted humor seems to be contagious.

Gave me chills actually... and I really like how you formatted the piece with the childrens rhyme on one side in italics - I could almost imagine children chanting it

Oh, wow, you totally put a new perspective on a seemingly innocent teddy bear. This is definitely a creepy and morbid poem, but that's what makes it so delightfully different. This poem doesn't suck, it's wonderful! Why do you doubt yourself? I love this poem as much as your other ones, and the formatting was also pretty clever on this one, and the ending was effective as well. Very nice, very sharp imagery.

chibichocobo

O.o Creepy but also vage. (sp? TT^TT) @__@ I am so tired. --; It is 2 A.M were I live --scratch that 2:48 A.M and I can not sleep! O_O My mind is just filled with inspiration. XD *sleeps* Z_z

!~* Noelle *~!

creepy

its quite subtle...and the theme is quite hard to grasp...but i don't know why but i feel something good in this poem...oh and pls if you have the time...pls do review some of my poems...thanks..

truly yours...