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| not sure yet 2005-06-02 ch 1, | abusevery pretty, excellent imagery, i really enjoyed the line Miles and miles of time left buried over itself., good flow to it as well, yea, i have nothing interesting to say, beautifully done |
| Summerdazed 2005-05-01 ch 1, | abuseit's little sad, but i think it's really cute too ^_^ esp. the 'eggs and starfish', hehe. and the first and last lines were amazing!! btw, have u heard of the anime naruto? i LOVE IT! haha, hope to meet u online someday to chat about it if u've seen it! u rock and this poem rock! =summerdazed= |
| charisma1525 2005-04-17 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. It was very thought provoking. I especially liked the line "Why is it hard to smile with the wind?" for some reason that really hit me. Keep writing. (Oh and thank you for putting me on your favorites...and I have continued to write, so I do have some new stuff up if you ever want to check it out.) |