Reviews for You Say You Love Me

Second-Hand-Screamo 2005-04-04 ch 1,	abuseHow about when they only say "I Love You" AFTER you've just given a little bit more of your body to him? That happened to me, it kind of tipped me off, wouldn't you say? But yeah, this poem is pretty good. I like the flow, and your rhyming (when it does rhyme:) love the relationship-dictatorship line) works really well, too. Good job, and thanks for your review:)
Lotus Tears 2005-03-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseAnother good poem but one i hope isn't based on any personal experiences
method acting 2005-03-25 ch 1,	abusevery nice. adds to favourites :-)