Nice! Great imagery by using the shoe and the laces. The start opens really well and you close it well with the anger and your own personal done!QueenVixta

*blinks* I sense a little anti-society anger here! lol :P Not my style, but definitely full of emotion.

nice song. i dont think ive seen many songs from you. nice job

I love it. This is really really really good. I love the whole shoelaces idea. Makes me think: ''Damn, I wish I would've written something like that'' _

Very good, once again Hawke!

Much love, Rosanna.

This is excellent, another good piece of work.