|Reviews for Tripping Up On Society's Shoe|
| SayIt'sWrong 3/27/05 . chapter 1
Nice! Great imagery by using the shoe and the laces. The start opens really well and you close it well with the anger and your own personal done!QueenVixta
| I Found Myself At 24 3/25/05 . chapter 1
*blinks* I sense a little anti-society anger here! lol :P Not my style, but definitely full of emotion.
| Cry Tears of Darkness 3/25/05 . chapter 1
nice song. i dont think ive seen many songs from you. nice job
| Rosanna28 3/25/05 . chapter 1
I love it. This is really really really good. I love the whole shoelaces idea. Makes me think: ''Damn, I wish I would've written something like that'' _
Very good, once again Hawke!
Much love, Rosanna.
| Educating Milo 3/25/05 . chapter 1
This is excellent, another good piece of work.