I like it. It made me feel like it was winter (which it is right now).Since you reviewed mine, I decided to review yours.

I really like the line "As a thorn sticks in my mind." Great job.

~dancingintheshadows

Now here's one for my favorite stories list. I like it. I like it alot. It's very, very beautiful and written at what appeals to me as a professional level. *cheers* Hurrah!

i love it...the imagery is brilliant and its amazingly well written...simply beautiful...great job. lots of love ~AllyCred~

P.S.~~thanks for the reviews appreciate it.

Interesting, and the last line is very nice.

This is brilliant! THe imagery BRILLIANt! Awesome work i wish i could write this good

i like winter...!

and i like the line "the winter day becomes me"

and "write me upon a wall" is a song, if you look at the way it's classified.

Was on your Xanga right?I like it, every line is written well with excellent words, but it's hard to follow.