I actually love this piece. When I clicked on it, I wasnt exactly sure what i would be getting, but i was expecting more of a self-image piece everyone does (ex. Same old same old...blah blah what I see do you...blah blah lol), but I was pleasantly surprised. The liquified mirror, reminds me of making glass, the shape always twisting and distorted. Very interesting piece altogether. The part where you say together in splendor, harmony and horror...that sort of threw me, but then again I thought about how we veiw ourselves. Our own good days and bad days...anyways, just my take. I liked this piece. Bravo to you for making me think.

um... glass is a liquid already. I like it, but i don't think that it is the best poem you have writen. very interesting, a melting mirror. But the only real problem i had with it was the fact that glass is already a liquid, it is just so condence that it seems like it is whole. if you look at really old windows, how it is sometimes thicker at the bottom or wavy, thats cause the liquid is slowly moving.

o.0 once again I am left speechless by your depth, it really makes you think about yourself, when you look at your own reflection, is it what other people may think of you, or what you know about yourself as said in your poem.

Firstly thanx for all the reviews!secondly this poem flows really well!and is a rather unique perception! GREAT STUFF! ~trw

Oh, wow, this is so awesome. I still say that you're the world's greatest poet! At least, as far as FictionPress is concerned...

:-)

I like a lot.

oo very interesting, taht would freak me out if a mirror melted infront of me... great description but it was kinda depressing. but still very weel written.

~William~

ooh, nice one.I enjoyed this one alot, it's really deep. -ADD

and here it is..the review you've been waiting for...lol..i like this poem...i think it represents change...niether posetive nor negative..just change...you look at ur self in the mirror and you make look the same on the outside, but on the inside you feel completely different...and this starts the erosion, the melting away...good job!...good descriptions and imagery...cyanide

i really love the meaning of this poem... really great poem

thats a really good poem.. you should be proud of it.

Wow. Just...Wow. Such an interesting concept paired with amazing descriptions makes this a wonderful poem. Nice work.