Nice. The repitition of the word "cedars" left a bit of a skrit-skrit in my mind, but that doesn't matter.

Nice imagery. I like how you leave it hanging as a question.

This sounds kind of epic and mysterious, like a wraith wandering through the swamp in a fantasy or a dream. The mist and teardrop image worked very well together and it was beautiful. I love your poetry.

oh that was cool! It's early and i stayed up late so it took me a moment to get it...but then once it clicked i really liked the whole poem - idea and writing together

~Mack

PS thanks for your review!

Very nice. Sounds a lot like something out of Tolkien's silmarillion, almost like a description of one of his Valier goddesses. Quite talented writing. Only one small blemish that I can see - "'monst" is an odd and awkward abbreviation to use. You could probably have used "'midst" to better effect.

This poem is really enigmatic. To be honest, I'm sure if I liked it or not. It didn't speak to me the way your other poems did. I will have to come back and reread this poem.