Very well done! Though I think the Way of the Gai'sho Té is odd, every world needs it's dedicated warrior types. ^^ The writing style was engaging, and I wish there had been more to the story. What happens to Kira after this and before she meets Dyeldin? Some more lead up to Kira being thrown out would be nice, as it seemed rather sudden, but I really liked the closing - very effective. Excellent job!