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Reviews For: Lillua
zral 2005-04-02 . chapter 1
You described everything very vividly! Cool detailing! I felt like I was almost there! Good work!
One Who Knows the Truth 2005-03-26 . chapter 1
That's really cool - is it possible to use more scary dark words? - maybe more description in between talking.
Invictus1213 2005-03-25 . chapter 1
Wow, you have me hooked...Good Job!
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