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Sakka-Fenikkusu
2006-11-09
ch 1,
abuseWhat a beautiful poem. *grabs a kleenex* I loved it.
strawberry-margaritha
2005-12-16
ch 1,
abuseI really like this one... my Fav lines:"From those who flare their flimsy tails, To those who spread their wings."and:"You, who guards the secrets,Of the seasons and the tides."

and:-/ "Sing with me my memories.Dream with me a while."

It emmediatly brings images into my head... i love it! :-)
.the twinkling of an eye
2005-04-17
ch 1,
abuseAw. So lovely. so sad. =(
Olusenka
2005-04-16
ch 1,
abuseYes! You're still writing.I want to cry. Your poetry is beautiful... And sad... which is why I want to cry. I'm going around in circles here.
inquistrix
2005-03-26
ch 1,
abuse"Sing with me my memories.

Dream with me a while."

Beautiful. Good work.
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