What a beautiful poem. *grabs a kleenex* I loved it.

I really like this one... my Fav lines:"From those who flare their flimsy tails, To those who spread their wings."and:"You, who guards the secrets,Of the seasons and the tides."

and:-/ "Sing with me my memories.Dream with me a while."

It emmediatly brings images into my head... i love it! :-)

Aw. So lovely. so sad. =(

Yes! You're still writing.I want to cry. Your poetry is beautiful... And sad... which is why I want to cry. I'm going around in circles here.

"Sing with me my memories.

Dream with me a while."

Beautiful. Good work.