Wow! This is pretty good! =D I'm going to look at Goodbye now. Or is it even out? 0.o Well, I'll be sure to look! ^.~ Oh and BTW, if you want to look up song lyrics, I usually go to yahoo.com and type in "song lyrics" under web serch and choose once of the web sites. If I can't find it on one, I'll just go to another. *shurgs* I can't really write down lyrics like that! Some singers saw words strangely, and a couple times I thought the singers were saying some words which were entirely different from the words they were singing! >.

The statements in this poem were sort of confusing. The dialouge might've been better if accompanied with action. I got the impression of a split personality, which is fun, arguing with his/herself.

Its a bit hard to understand but I like the choppiness. Ooh write story! Lol Keep up the good work.