what does this poem mean? did someone hurt her or did she hurt herself? what was she jealous of? sorry lots of questions. oh well anyway this is a good poem that could turn out alot of ways and all would end up with her in pain in the end.Write back if you can. don't use my e-mail addess I most likely wont cheak it far another whole month althuogh im always on the computer.hehehe

hmm...a monster?? was it greed? lust?? lol so many many things that could tear a person from the inside out! Nice poem, i really enjoyed it.

The subjects been used a lot but this was still a very interesting read! Love the use of the Christian girl to conflict with the monster. Your work has very good promise well done :)

This was really good. I liked it. It reminds me of myself, in a way. The rhyming was good.