another good strong piece

You defenitely have a way with endings! The last line I really like. I also like the cushion metaphor. Your writing is really unique and I like it a lot.

Interesting and different. I like it.

my favourite piece of your work... it is really meaningful and introspective. I love the silk and metal references because they add another level of imagery to your poetry that you have not previously achieved. They form a serious connection with the reader because of their interesting tone which cause the reader to stop and think, and thus connect.

very nice. very good. i like the description, pretty, but sad.especially these lines:"Fingertips of cold silk

With a hand of cool metal

My cheek is graced

I close my eyes."

keep up the work. ^_^-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-

Hm...interesting. Not really sure what to make of it actually...

Happy Easter Sunday! We are back from Oklahoma, but I haven't had a chance to get online until this morning. Great poem! What is it about? My author alerts told me you had two, so I guess I better go read the other one also. :) There is some strange but beautiful imagery in this. Keep up the awesome work and I can't wait to talk with you again! ~Abigail

Interseting

Like the line about amuse and bemuse! Like the bittersweet nature of the poem as well. Well done.