wow thats a long bio in caps! lol nice. i like the poem as well

WOW! SO POWERFUL AND IN SUCH DESPERATION! my fave line "Your whole life a hopeYour memory a dreamThrough tears you smileThrough pain you scream" WOW! great images are displayed!beaut!~TRW

WOW! The end was...Wow. It really caught my eye. I loved the whole poem, you've got an okay flow but the end, the end was just powerful and amazing. GREATNESS!

I like this. Sorry I haven't read any of your poems recently, I have been busy. Thank you for commenting on my poem Take Flight, My Child. Good write!

wow. amazing.this writing really captured my attention.i could almost feel myself falling out of reality.the rhyme pattern is different, and i really like it.the only thing that could make this better would be a wicked guitar melody =Phave you ever though of becoming a song writer?

cheers-Katryn

Wow. I like, haven't reviewed since forever. Anyway, this was a wonderful poem, and I enjoyed the concept that you had throughout the poem. The flow was nice, and the last line was also an effective conclusion to the piece. Keep up the excellent work.

chibichocobo

Hey, long time no read, eh? Well, I like it. It's really nice. Poetry is definately a strength of yours. Oh, and I finished 'Life in the World' and I believe you were the one who wanted Ky and Jaime to get together. Right? Well...read it and let me know if you want a epilog. Thankies!

Sincerely,Loki Blacktrick

Your writing has improved since you first started, but still has an angsty feel. Thanks for reviewing my work way back when. And Donnie Darko is a great movie.

angsty indeed. your poems always seem to have such great meaning behind it. hmm, so basically, this poem includes angst toward people/a person, lies, and confusion. ah, what do i know. it's hard for me to interpret poems sometimes. XDeither way, well written. i especially like these lines:"Your whole life a hope

Your memory a dream

Through tears you smile

Through pain you scream."

-kwazykandypie AKA Kelly Ann-

That was pretty good.

Nice... Cant think of much else to say, other than I hope my friends can get on to read it... Keep writing.

Flowed really well - I especially liked the last three lines.

Great last line! Really awesome. Once again I love the imagery. You seem kind of depressed in these poems. I hope everything's okay. :) Well, talk to you soon. ~Abigail

Dont really understand:S