AWW I LOVE IT!! It rhymes and everything! I love a good poem that rhymes. Well, I gotta go watch a movie now. Keep on writing!! Don't care what other people say. If you get a bad review for this one, BASH THEM ALL! Muah!

wow! that was good! i only noticed one small typo...other than that it wa gr8! keep writing!

How come it is always hardest to answer questons that start with two simple words: What if?

I like how you blend vaugety and are still personal...