aw, this is cute, but I must say it started out great, sweet and stuff, but then you fluctuated between first and third person at the end, left out words, and minor stuff like that.

Other than that, I think it's a great start. Are you going to make a novel? I'd read it, that's for sure. It'd be interesting to see how their relationship develops from friendship to an item.

So, if you think about writing one, I'm up for reviewing it!
Navaura~

P.S. The girl you describe sounds like one of my bestfriends from middle school. We still talk and stuff. I'm a college sophomore now.

OKay, I know I have read this story before! I have no idea why I didn't review it! I must have been out of my mind that day or something! But seriously, I read it.

It was pretty short, so I don't know what I could comment on... was it expanded at one point? I notice some reviews for chapter 2.

Well, good luck!

Cute, short story. I enjoyed reading it. Nice work. Keep writing (in general)!

Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.

~Twilight Starr~

the ending completely sucked...sorry but it did

That was super cute, I liked it! xD

And thank you for the review!

MORE DETAIL! It has a good story line, but you defiantly need to add more.

WAIT! What did Donny do in the first place?! And why does Katie WANT Donny to go to jail? (As seen in the last sentence of 2nd chapter). Lol, too many questions, but nevertheless interesting. Liked the first chapter, very cute. :)

I think this story is really sweet. You should continue, it'd be good to see what happens with donny and katie.

This story was so cute. I liked it. Good job, it has potential, go with it!

I liked that alot, fast and cute. Sure, continue. It'd be nice to see how it all turns out for Donny.

Wow! That was so cute! It seemed to go kind of fast, but it was still stellar! I want you to continue!Laterz...

This is really sweet...good for Donny!!

Yes, continuation would be nice...perhaps...