Aww! THis was really sweet...I love it...I like it a lot...keep it up.*adds to faves* --pammy-

well, i agree, not your best, then again, it doesnt seem all that depressing or angsty. I seem to prefer those types at the moment. anyways, nice attempt, and i think you mispelt something at the end of the last stanza.

Peace and Chicken Grease

wow, deep, emotional, powerful... wow

wow... thats touching. smthg i kinda wanna say to sm1 i like... i mean i feel the same bout sm1 but he so doesnt return the feelings. the dreaming is always good, the thinking bout it too. ah well. good luck with it and nice poem. relaly touching. it may not be ur best, as u said, but i dunno. id have to go read everything and let you know, lol! nice