Wow. Powerful. And scary/sad. I liked it though. The rhyming scheme was very interesting. I liked it, I think it worked really well for this poem You did a very good job with finding rhymes without taking away from the seriousness of child abuse. Nice poem, really truly good job.

Very dark..the images are stark and arresting. Nicely done D

Aw that's so dark and powerful. I feel like I'm watching this poor girl getting beat and there's nothing i can do about it. Great poem. Nice choice of words and word order. Keep it up!

wow.. very sad and powerful.. awesome poem