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| HisSourpatch 2006-06-22 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting stand. I like it a lot. Although you said it would be short.. maybe you should add to it. I'd love to read more of your thougths on such a topic. Love you dear. p.s. not enough here for constructive critiscism. |
| Pixie in a Birdcage 2005-07-03 ch 1, | abuseOh! This one's really interesting! |
| Mrs. MJackson 2005-03-28 ch 1, | abusewow that was good, kept my attention the whole way through. you're very creative to have thought of something like this, and to have gone through with it quite well. i'll be sure to put you on my author list for your other stories |
| Jazzetry 2005-03-26 ch 1, | abuseMost excellent...a philosophical tidbit for me to nibble on at church tomorrow morning. Great job! |
| R.T. michaels 2005-03-26 ch 1, | abusei'm going to be honest. i like and dislike this story at the same time. i like the fact the you gave both of them humanly characteristics, i didnt like how you made it seem like the devil could easily get back, if he just apologies. what i really like about it though was the beginning, where you were talking about the cross and their our ways of thinking of it. all in all, good job. |
| swift sky silver 2005-03-26 ch 1, | abuseyou make some very good and interesting points. the fact is that religion came into being when people wanted explanations for well, everything. as technology advanced, and more discoveries in science were made, i guess many drew away from such faith. this was a very good read. keep writing =0) |
| Laura Barton 2005-03-26 ch 1, | abuseA nice piece of writing. Short, yes, but I think the length it is works perfectly with the story. I don't know really how to put my words, but to say it simply: I really, really liked it. |