wow... this is really good. really powerful!

so sad! oh my my my... *hugs* wow... very powerful *hugs again*

Oh my god. I loved this one. Very emotional and heart sick. I wish you all the luck in the world. Please, keep writing. Definately one of the best poems I've read on here, very... deep... shows... a lot of imagry and feel to it. I can't really explain it. It's giong on my fav's list.

write hard, write long, write until dawn ~The Love Demi Goddess

wow, that must be hard, i dont think anyone could imagine how u feel, well written lots of emotion, i know you dont care with what i gotta say anyway, but good job

whoa, the impact is very good! especaily the ending. Review me if you're free!

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