I read one, can't go without reading them all!!

It's good. I'm not a supre pom expert, but i realy like you;re style, its like a story, only not boring, like alot of poms i've red

This poem brought tears to my eyes. It made me live a dream and realize a desire to be young again myself. *sigh* This is very touching. Keep writing great pieces like this!

Chandra