Thats creative.

I hate wearing glasses.

I curious of your inspiration. Do get back to me on that, if you could. Regularly I might file this away easily in angst, but I do see something else here. I'm not sure. Some shadow of something, anything. I mean, it's obvious you have a natural talent, but I'm not sure. Do you write all your pieces like this, in one of two stanzas? It shows delicacy...but not strength. I'm going to have to keep looking, aren't I? Charming.

wonderful.

'the shattered piece of/glass that I use to see/the world' Really sad line actually; as if your experiences of life is ruined because of this. The ending is a factual ending, whilst the start seems more cared for/emotional. Interesting contrast. It works well.

oh. wow. that was really something. *longpause* it seems you leave me speechless XD I love the way you transformed a moment into a metaphor. lovely.

You say so much with so little words. Very, very powerful!

Definitely a beautiful, breathtaking poem that was different than what I've expected. A stunning finish to something such as these, and I'm amazed at your versatile talent through all these poems that you display. Such a lovely poem that wields a hypnotic power over me.

chibichocobo

wow...very powerful...

I was expecting something totally different! Blew my mind! Awsomely powerful!

It's short, but contains a lot of meaning. I loved it!

i was thinking glasses, u know... on ur head? ah, either way, cool piece! wasnt what i was expecting obviously, lol

Wow...this is some powerful stuff. I broke my glasses the other day, and yet...and yet the breaking of your sight savers has such depth to it...thank you for writing this, it was very, very good!

nice piece. simply written. i like it. :)

short and sweet. I loved it, I would have never thought to write a poem about breaking your glasses. that's pretty awesome. loved it.

Short, simply, but powerful. You really have a way of bringing your words to emotion.

ANNA