It's almost like a haiku-short 'n sweet. This reminds me of the Book of Enoch legends of the Watchers interbreeding with the "daughers of men".

Ah duality, the yin and the yang... hehe. As for "Elusive Lucidity" notice how the title is an oxymoron meaning it gives light yet not in a clear sort of way and as for the poem, you know how the moon is associated with the 'divine feminine' if you know what I mean; it's a tribute to it...

a strange new theory there, one ive never heard of. lol

we r the spawn of sin, no?

great poem!

I envy your poetical talent, mainly because you can describe with such eloquence in a few words, but mainly because I have no poetical talent to speak of *stares away in shame* Heh, anyway, beautiful work as usual, Noelle _ I admire your work, and the concepts behind them are also extraordinary. The abstactism and surrealism adds a perfect touch to an already godly piece.

chibichocobo

Interesting theory...

took me a while to get it, but it does describe humans pretty interpretation of humanity.

This was VERY goog! I love it, it's short and simple, I love longish poetry but simple ones like these always make me smile. You're so talented, do keep writing!

On Used.

Thank you very much for the second comment. Oh yes I know exactly what you mean. Not a problem, like I said, you were very nice about what you wrote and I respect you for that, thank you.

I feel I could have done better on Used as well, to tell you the truth everytime I read my own work I do feel terrible about it.

I don't really like myself much, and I guess it's reflected in the poetry as well, oops.

But anyways, I'm glad you understand and you're so thoughtful about it.

TeeHee, you're very welcome, you're a good author, don't let anyone tell you otherwise, or I'll come and beat 'em up XD

EvanPark

Great Job! Loved it, though I would have made it a little more Capitalized and the like.

MJ

short and sweet. i like the impact.

Awesome. Thanks for the review, and it was sarcasm. I really liked the imagery in this, well done.

hahah, i like this...quite cute actually, love the angel/demon scenario...so true so true

muchLUB-kerr

Short, sweet, and deep in four lines.

LOVE IT!

this is very kool. I love the ideas

linkin park. *ahem* sorry, the title just made me think of that cd. anywayz, i agree with that theory 100%! anyways, i need to stop to go do my viking project (over easter break! -.-) great job! keep writing

Sumi-chan; what you call love, I call pain.