do u even check ur fiction press mail? do u not care what is to become of ur readers, who are wilting away at the fact that u havent updated in 4 years? why put up a compelling story then not finish it? tease us with seeing through tears but not finishing it?
please update. please please update, u have a wonderful thing going on here, if u didnt already know. im serious. this is major publish material. and if not for the sake of creativity then for ur readers. who, as i mentioned before, are wilting!
cheers,
Mojo

This chapter was fantastic. Kind of scary, though, because I can see a little bit of Eaven in me.

I LOVE Landon! I can't wait for the next chapter of this story, its so funny. I'm not sure who i like better, though, Landon or Tyler, I'll just have to read more to find out *hint-hint* Lol.
Three biggest cliches... um... personally i think they're:
-bad boy-good girl love
-brothers best friend love or best friends brother love (not sure but i luv em both!)
-from hate to love...love.
Does that make sense to you? Hope i helped and can't wait for the next chappy- as i said.
Bye
RW

My gosh this is so cool! Why the long hiatus though? Do you still intend to finish it? The idea is really cute and interesting. I hope you continue it, even if it has been a year and more since your last update. The story is amazingly creative and it would be a shame to let it go to waste :)

Aww... :( It's been a week :) And I like Tyler, personally. Character interaction is always so much fun when the characters hate each other (or think they do ;) Anyways, hope you do update this sometime, had me laughing all over. :D

Great story very funny update soon! And whats happening with seeing through the tears?

Oh my freaking goodness. This is...well, I've never read a romance like this?

Tyler...I think. Yeah. Freaky perverted thing that Landon is. Hee hee.

Uh...whoa...

::twitch:: Uh...what's wrong with that guy? Lol...

Please update this. It's a totally amazing story.

i like the story,not as much as seeing through tears.I like the idea and can't wait to see how she deals with the landon guy.I have no preference yet between tyler and landon because bad breath is a big no and landon is alittle annoying but it made me laugh.So my favorite male character is "the heart boy"harold,aw.well loking foward to a next update.

it's been over a year, ah. what did we do to make you hate us so much (we'll still love you bundles and bundles if you choose to update soon) and yes. that's a threat. gr

i really love this story, but i love seeing through tears more, you havent updated in ages! I'm dying! but i will answer you questions and review because there seems no other way of getting my cry for help (because I"m dying from not having anything new from STT) across to you. i really like Landon, he's really funny. as for the biggest cliches on FP, that would be the typical girl who's pretty but won't admit it, then the sexiest guy in school falls for her. it's used over and over again. who do i like more? difficult to say... i think Ty (can i call him that?) really likes Eaven (i adore that name by the way, and i can't find what it means, do you know by any chance?), and i think if she'd stop hating him for about 3 seconds, she might acctually like him. also, i think there's somthing that happeed between them before (thining of what Lily said about her nt hating him so much last year) i really want to know what that's all about! okay, thats just about it... update soon so that i know you're still out there! But you never know, you may have been abducted by one of your crazy fans so theycan have your stories all to themselves... damnit! i should have thought of that first! please update! :)

So cute! I think I'm in love with your story. Examle: I hugged my computer at one point. And excuse me if I'm a bit perverted myself, but this would make a very interesting Rated M story...Anyway...

Update Soon!

Later!

Really good story, I hope you're going too continue it!

I can't decide yet if I like Landon or Tyler better. I think I'll wait until I know more about them.

The three biggest clichés I've seen on FP...

1) I've read a whole lot of stories where the main character (the male one in most cases) has striking green eyes. Well, the main character or just about every single character that is supposed to be good looking. I personally know only one person who has remotely green eyes, but that eye colour seems to be essential for an attractive main character.

2) The second thing that seems to absolutey necessary: the female main character has no experience whatsoever with boyfriends or even males in general and is, of course, completely innocent. It's okay though if her love interest is the worst player/** of the town. Wouldn't it be boring if the were both virgins? ;)

3) I don't know if I can come up with something that hasn't already been mentioned a couple times; let me think...If the female main character has a brother, you can be sure that he is older. I'm not sure if I've ever seen a story on FP where someone had a younger brother. But of course, an older brother is much more convenient for he can have a best friend that can fall for his friend's little sister...

Hope you update soon :)