Fantastic ending. XD

This is fantastic- I love your word choice; it makes everything seem more palpable.

I really liked this poem. I'm sure I will be reading it again and again...thanks for posting :)

the ending..was like poem

bloody brilliant...-Lyra

interesting, reminds me a bit of me poem Icy Fingers but hmm yeah i like this, shows, at least to me, how people can be so hard and cold on the outside but inside they're insecure, or maybe showing how you take the pain she causes because you love her, i could be well off but this is what i got out of the poem, nice use of brackets, great structure x weasel within x

i like this, its a good piece.

this is really interesting... i like how it's different, you know, you can't tell quite what's reality.. and, you have got to love the brackets.. :P

Wow. Just beautiful. flows perfectly. Brava!

this is a really cool poem. And the role reversal of an abusive girlfriend instead of vice versa is really what I like.

eep! It gives me chills! Hauntingly beautiful.

*thumbs up* put pictures in my head I wish weren't there. kinda cool.

I loved it!

Interesting.

Wow! Powerful and strong. I love the image. Especially the first line. Thankyou very much for your review as well.