The imagery is astounding."and noticed that I could still see my reflection in the dirty glass of the front windows."--the clarity of these emotions is self-evident, more so that it appears in that which is usually ignored.

A realistic approach to what seems like a lifetime passing by in a monotonous second, maybe even half of it.

Je l'aime

K

i love the repition & how you describe yourself as a stranger.. beautifully written adn very powerful

there's a lot of emotion put into this piece. great job. keep it up =0)

*wipes eyes* amazing.