Very well done, the rhthyme is excellent and really drives the poem well, just one typo towards the end but no biggy (I do it all the time and somtimes have to edit an entire work countless times to get them all). Keep up the great work!

I really liked this poem! the only thing i saw was a small typeo *dont ya hate em!* "Honey don't glare tears inot my eyes" In to? very nice other than that!