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Haha this is good! ^_^ Exactly how I feel when I'm trying to write something for a deadline!

I really like that too!! You are an awesome writer. That is actually something that URSUS (my school's literary club) would really appreciate, lol. I think you'd enjoy it. Aahh, the bell. Well I am here for two more periods...yeah, four periods in the stupid library. I am rambling. Well great job!! :-D

Lol, that was pretty funny but pretty pointless. The detail was good, you repeated yourself too much, but I take it this was true so.. yeah if you were really under that kind of pressure I can see why you would.

Not bad.. but not good. It was okay.