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| Crimson xTear 2007-09-30 ch 1,  | abuseVery good. I don't really have any criticism to give, sorry. But if this is a ballad, then it should be in the song category, not poetry. That's all, basically. |
| Betsy Anne 2007-06-22 ch 1, | abuseAh. Pretty neat. It's easy to read. |
| WineRedRomance 2005-03-30 ch 1, | abuseWow, I don't really have any suggestions, it's great the way it is! |