I like this story it's unique.

^^I loved it! Very good story! I can't wait until your next one's out this is gonna be exciting!

good story =)

Ah, I gotta go to sleep x( Poo. Well, this was an interesting chapter :3 I hope to read more later!

Ooh, sounds interesting ^^ I wanna hurry and read the next chapters!

this seems like it has a nice plot and it a pretty good story, but no joke, not to be mean, it has so many grammar errors it really intereres with the enjoyment of the story. i say this only with intentions of helping you improve, not making fun of you.

pretty cool story. i decided to check urs out. i really like ur plot. keep up the good work!!

Great Story, I can't wait to read more, just don't put it all in bold.

It's great. Just dont bold it, it makes it hard to read.