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| queen of catastrophe. 2007-06-27 ch 17,   | I hate her ** Uncle James. He's an ** and hope he dies a slow and an EXTREMELY PAINFUL death. I also wish Beth would've been able to tell somebody instead of hiding it but at least she told Sam...it was never to late but she died in the process. I loved this story and for all it's worth and I am happy I could actually hate a character or love a character. People can relate. Keep on writing. And I give condolances to Beth. -Mika |
| citrus scented 2005-06-07 ch 17, | ...chillingly tragic. sad but not quite hopeless ending, i must admit it surprised me. I loved the lilliesi n the bin it just about summed it all up perfectly, this was a very moving and lonely tale. |
| citrus scented 2005-06-07 ch 16, | very moving letter. |
| Infinity Plus One 2005-06-03 ch 17, | The angst contained within that poem was almost too strong. Well done. This has been a great story all the way along. Well done. That is all I can say. |
| BlackNailedBeauty 2005-06-02 ch 17, | It was awesome, I loved it. Keep writing. Rina |
| Koba van der Lubbe 2005-06-02 ch 17, | Ok that was easily the most depressing thing i've read all year. Geez, i know why you had to end it, but i wish there was more. Time to start on your other stories...~Ryan |
| BlueAki 2005-06-01 ch 17, | OK> I've been reading this story and it was really REALLY good, but than the last two chapters are very weird, awkward, and confusing. It suddenly turned plotless and I was a bit dissapointed. I'm sorry to sound mean, but you left loose ties. |
| Brianne Tyler 2005-06-01 ch 17, | *Cries* That was beautifully written. I wish she hadn't died... |
| Strangergirl 2005-06-01 ch 17, | It's over? No way! |
| The Random Witness 2005-05-30 ch 16, | WOW! OMG! great entrie and i think it was a good choice to write it as a letter not her re-telling a confrontaton in a diary entrie. Sad stuff! it leaves me thinking tho "does it end there? or is there more to come?" But its left open, so you kood go either way! Fully Sik Writing Chik!~Ami |
| Koba van der Lubbe 2005-05-22 ch 16, | Sry this took so long. Good, shes finally telling Sam. I cant wait til the nxt chapter.~Ryan |
| Infinity Plus One 2005-05-22 ch 16, | No! This is going to kill my soul. Good stuff you have written here. |
| Infinity Plus One 2005-05-22 ch 15, | WoW this sounds very interesting indeed. Swiftly on to the next chapter...! |
| Infinity Plus One 2005-05-22 ch 14, | Meh. This is deep. In a very good way. Poor girl has such a difficult decision to make. If only there was a phone line one could call up to obtain all the answers. |
| BlueAki 2005-05-20 ch 16, | wow, thats so damn deep. |