Reviews for Don't Let Me Leave

Reviews For: Don't Let Me Leave

Oriamus Amadeus 2005-04-10 ch 1,	abuse/Very/ good! Especially for a romance-poem. In this way, I am impressed. What I've read of romance poetry is all the same, but this one takes it a step further. I think your emotion is conveyed even more heavily in this work than in someone else's 'Please love me' kind of piece. Flows well on a consistent rhyme-scheme, which is pleasing to the mind and pushes me to continue without question. Another beautiful piece channeling your thoughts.
Jen 2005-04-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseok, just watch the spelling a bit there. :P lol! It's tears, not tares. i think some of the punctuation you could do without because it kinda breaks the poem a bit. you probably dont purposely do it but it does kinda have a rhythm and there are commas there that kinda break that up a bit. but other than that, it's pretty good. ^^
His Only 2005-03-30 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful! Gosh you explain the pain of love so well. I really loved your beginning. It was a nice setting for the rest of the poem. I dont know what else to say. I can't possibly explain how much I love your poetry. Its all so beautiful! God Bless.
Owl 2005-03-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis was a wonderful piece as well. I would suggest capitlizing the first letter of each line and keeping more of a rythm, but otherwise it was very good. You have a great way with words and your ryhmes were fantastic.
Zephyr Zaelza 2005-03-28 ch 1,	abusewow that was awesome, I actually feel the same way about someone right now...but anyway, I loved the way you wrote it, it came directly from your heart :D. Thanks for the review, it was greatly appreciated, I hope to see more work coming from you. Keep it up!-Zephyr Zaelza
Annarence Studio 2005-03-28 ch 1,	abuseVery well written, it sounded like you wrote it from the bottom of your heart. Geniune and sad. As a side note "to" doesn't rhyme with "you".

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