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ess3sandra 2007-05-27 ch 1,	abusehm hm, where is the story? it would be sweet to read it, but only if you well would post it i think, so hint hint hun.
heart race 2006-12-06 ch 1,	abusei don't think you understand how much this story means to me... pathetic but true
Mical Alexander 2006-12-02 ch 14,	abuse"Agent Smith?" I don't know if that was intentional or not, but it made me laugh pretty hard. Heh. Agent Smith. ^_^ Loved the fic. You're right, it is a little incoherent...but hell, it's a slash fic. Slash fics don't have to be coherent. They just have to incldue sex and prettyboys. This fic has all that covered, and then some.
Dammerung 2006-11-11 ch 7, anon.	abuse...now I really want to see a picture of Eugene in blue gingham. Damien perhaps projecting his head huger than life. Damien: I AM THE GREAT AND POWERFUL SMITH! Eugene: ** you. Damien: Nice shoes.
Dammerung 2006-11-11 ch 5, anon.	abuseLOVE the "you're such a spoilsport comment." Juxtaposed with the tired sigh, it provides a bit of a neat insight into Damien's character.
Curb Crasher 2006-09-23 ch 14,	abuseI don't think this story is that hard to follow. I'm fifteen, I've just spent the last three hours reading this, and I can follow. I'm tired because I wake up at five and it's twelve, but it was totally worth it. Besides, I don't have school tomorrow. Great story.
Onionheadhat 2006-07-30 ch 14,	abuseI see you write in your last AN that the clues are hard to follow -honestly, that must have more to do with the reader in question than the writing. The fact that its a first person narrative may lead people to believe that there are nothing more going on than what the "I" person catches. Sure, the story may need some more editing, a clearer timeline, and I would have liked to see a bit more of Eugenes angst. Hes stepping out seems to have very little impact on him? I really like that its a rather unusual setting and plot for a slash story, they do tend to follow the same lines. That said, I found it a very decent story, and I will be looking to read more of your work. ^_^
S.Tori 2006-06-13 ch 14, anon.	abuse"writing’s not my forte. I’m more of an illustrator" ...HEART what are you talking about? You can be awesome at both! (that said, that is totally what I always say. And why I don't write very much. I would rather doodle than drabble. Rather sketch than outline a story. Stuff like that ^^) OH MY GOSH THIS IS SO CUTE! Sorry. But... this story ROCKED :D :D :D very good job with it! grin
S.Tori 2006-06-13 ch 7, anon.	abuseOMG LOL okay... sorry... it's just, secret slob makes me think of catcher in the rye, because holden had that one roomie that was the 'secret slob', who looked really nice all the time, but was actually someone who only owned like this rusty piece of crap razor... giggles I really like this story. It's well written, and very fun ^_^
Hokit 2006-04-19 ch 14,	abuseBrilliant! Absolutely loved this story! Do you happen to be British? I find 'Persuasion' to have this quirkiness that the English are well known for - sort of an Inspector Morse kind of veneer that's both sinister yet highly intriguing. Favourite 'quirky' part of the story has to be in Chapter 2, when Thomson convinces himself to not worry about the prospect of juggling two jobs, yet almost immediately regrets it afterwards. Love the grammar, love the structure and I especially love the fact you managed to finish this story. Many thanks and congratulations :)
ddz008 2006-04-01 ch 14,	abuseI didn't quite understand the author note :S This was the end of the story? Or you have decided to stop writing? Well, anyways... I have to tell you I love this story, I think it's really coherent, interesting, it has everything a good story should have.And as always I love your writing :)
ddz008 2006-04-01 ch 13,	abuseYou're so mean! He isn't leaving him?! ¬¬ You really make us thik all that... I'll keep reading.
ddz008 2006-04-01 ch 12,	abuseGreat story!I was going to review until I finished reading the whole 14 chapters you have written but I was so surprised with the end of this character that I have to say something. Is he really leaving Damien? T_T I like him.I know you're doing what's best for the story so I'm going to keep reading! :)
C. Khafre 2006-03-31 ch 14,	abuseNow THAT'S an ending! all smiles
heart race 2006-03-31 ch 14,	abusei love you. i had a dream last night that this was updated and behold, i am a prophet. it was very enjoyable... short! but it ended things very nicely. good job. this is so pretty and weirdly symbolic (?). anyway my brother's telling some girl about some guy taking pictures of him having sex with his girlfriend and then using the same camera to take pictures of his teacher's gradebook! i'll write something for you, i swear, maybe tim/kolson maybe something new. i have to write. aaight. xx.

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