It is strange, i have always wondered what it would be like if RPGs were real worlds, i am greatly looking foreward to this story.

This is really... odd, and i scanned the first paragraph, found it boring... yeah. You use alot of long words you don't need, you sound like candidate trying to become the president- using long useless words to get around the subject. Good writing isn't necessarily all in the vocabulary. Simple words often are more powerful than long ones with no purpose.

KISS- Keep it simple stupid

~Karen~