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| Bloodfeeder94 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseall right, fair enough!! i'll put an alert on this story. |
| manxforth 2007-01-11 ch 1, | abuseI'd be happy if there was another chapter...? |
| Solace 2005-08-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseYet another story of your's I like...Do that update thing...or whatever it's called. Sorry...I'm not used to these review things... |
| Ryenon 2005-04-29 ch 1, | abuseYay! Chapter 1 is up! You did a very good job, for a newbee at writing, I've read worse from people that right all the time. My suggestions are more detail and put more passion into it, you posses great skill dont let it go to wast! Keep up the good work. |
| NotA-Frayed 2005-03-28 ch 1, | abuseIts very nice. If you ever have seen "American Idol," you will understand my next comment. Quoth Randy "It was just ok for me." But, then again, a predictable beginning is the best way to begin an unpredictable story. Keep up the work. I have a feeling it could be a little less normal when the lesbian (I hope I am not taking the title too literally) comes in. Keep going! |