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| Dances-with-Stoats 2005-03-30 ch 1,  | abuse:) I'm a sucker for happy endings. Your poem has great rhythm. The repeated phrase helps everything stay together. You might want to try and make it into a song. |
| not sure yet 2005-03-29 ch 1, | abuseemotional, makes a strong point, good wording and mommyful, yea, im an idiot, its nice, i like it, good job |