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| battousai24 2005-04-07 ch 1, | I love it. I could relate to the first part of this poem. "I love you without regret"... I like that line the most. Also, the second stanza was the one I could relate to so much. And I guess also the first... lol |
| Lotuss Tears 2005-04-04 ch 1, | Very nice, everyone's someone is out there somewhere. |
| Joedore 2005-04-01 ch 1, | First of all, thank you so much for reading my works, add to that your reviews! I hope you keep on reading. As to this poem, a big "CUTE!" i say. I can feel the emotions in every word and stress. May i suggest, that next time, try to play on making poems that are not literally clear. It will help you increase your talent in expressing these kind of thoughts. WD! good write, ciao. |
| CryNowLaughLater 2005-03-31 ch 1, | This is very cute. Great job on this. YOu're are very gifted and you use your talent well. Again , Great job on thie piece of work. P.SThank you so much for reading and reviewing my work. |
| saeo 2005-03-28 ch 1, | Heh, the ending is a surprising twist. I know that many people can relate with this, so a wonerful job on being to put it down on paper so nicely. =D Great job, I like this. ~Always, saeo |
| milady424 2005-03-28 ch 1, | WOW...tear jerker... i think it is beautiful! End, ML |