"He turns to me and smiles,

offering his hand with a look

of amused

requirement

that makes me give up—

the giving up."

I so, so so so loved that sentence.

Aw, I do so love this! It's very sweet and heartfelt. :)

Awesome work Mrs. O! You're really good at writing poems! your my fav poet now! D

Very effective in its simplicity.

quite melodic, has like a calm atmosphere, i like how these emotions aren't all splattered on the page, it's simple, but just really nice x weasel within x