Sugoi, very cool... and yet so very appropriate the "warrior's death" for Zhen. ^__^ Thank you for updating. *bows* I enjoyed this story very very much.

Respect,
Toshiro Furúkawá

Yin ~

Aww! Why's the chapters gotta be so short! >_< You must continue... and keep me updated when you do.

Peace n' Much Luv / L.H.F.R.,Toshiro FurukawaakaOld River

NO! YOU KILL HIM! I KNEW IT! HOW COULD YOU?! Sigh...WHY THE BEST MOVIES ALWAYS HAVE TRAGIC LOVE?! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON! DON'T IGNORE THIS STORY! PLEASE! SOON! I HAVE TO KNOW! ARGHH! Anyhow, please update soon. ::bowed:: Farewell till next time!

75? That line confused me...SHE'S 75?! I hope you explained it, I don't much about the meanings behind the number like 69. Didn't know it until MUCH LATER...I'm a sad man..Oh well...THE PLOT THICKENS! GASP!

God, that was really sad...I really love how you describe her feeling about his death...So detailed...AWESOME CHAPTER! ::gave a thumbs up::

Poor Sun Mi, I know how she felt. A PAWN in your own mother's scheme. It's really sad. I really like Cross scar, nicely done. And nice details for her characters. I can remember lot of names lol.

Heh how sweet...now they have to be runaways from the clan. So sweet...love is so sweet..::starry:: ...YOU"RE NOT PLANNING TO KILL HER BOYFRIEND, ARE YOU?! I mean every great martial arts movie like HERO, Crouching Tiger and Hidden Dragon, and the House of Flying Daggers...is always sad...SNIFF.

::nods:: Romantic love is strongest love...and can also lead to hatred...AH! THIS CHAPTER IS SO INTERESTING! AND SAD BUT INTERESTING! Anyhow, the action scenes is really detailed and the scene reminded me of "HERO" the movie.

Sniff...how sad...In a way, she still cares about her master...but she had to kill her...FOR some reason XIAO reminded me of my mother, showed false innocene to guests and strict harsh coldness toward me...SNIFF...Meanie...I had to bring my friend everytime I GOT a B in my grade, so she wouldn't yell at me because there's a guest in the house. Anyhow, what's going to happened to Zhen now? I wonder.

HEY! CHOSEN HERE! LONG TIME NO SEE! First of all, ::bow:: I deeply apologize for my late responses. I been really busy with school, writing story and one fanfic, and I just recently have a surgery on my stomach. Anyhow sorry about blabbering. Whatever happened to FIGHT SCHOOL? I would like to see it finish, but for some reason I took interest in this fiction because of this title. You really come up with cool titles and you're fan of His movies? Lol just like my big brother. As for me I can't really handle the extreme violence. I just looked at it... and throw up. I'm used to reading extreme violence...but not watching it. But this story is short but somehow, I'm interested in it, especially the last paragraph. Going to read other chapters!

Did you miss me?!! well i updated after not doin that for a while now. i have two new chapters. Keep going with your story i love how you ended it lots of suspence!! Keep it up!! ^.^

Yin -

I Just finished Ch. 8: "Sun Mi's Victory". I got to hand it to ya, It rules! Kinda reminds me of the Kung-Fu films I enjoy so much *laughs*

So far so good, too bad the chapters are kind of short (I'm normally reading long-winded epics)Please keep me posted when you update. ^__^

If you're interested please check out either my work or my brother JT's work (his pen name is - Adek) Well peace n' much luv.

- V. Gray

Damn Yin, this stuff is pretty good. I am totally inspired by your writing. Chapter 2 Purpose coming soon! Sword action was great. Kinda hard to follow on my part, but it was quite good. Story and plot is awesome. Zhen is uber as well =D. KEEP WRITING!

Your a excellent writer! This story is really good!

Great sword action, Your improving on the action part, and thats a good sign. have you ever seen the movie sin city?