This is a good story, though Heaven and Hell is the title of a book written by Aldous Huxley about his experiences using mescaline, a derivative of peyote, which is a cactus.

Well written though. The title is really the only problem.

Oh. My. God.

You updated!

*dies!*

Ah, you made me so happy. And oh what a chapter! I can't wait for the rest!

After having read one of your stories, I had to check and see if there were any others I might be interested in. (I seem to be in a religious stories mood today...can you tell?) I liked this one too, although I don't know if I'll completely get into it. The idea of Gabriel calling Lucifer "Lucy" amuses me, and I think you've chosen an original premise and developed the characters in an interesting way. Keep up the good work.

Saena

Aww, poor Lucy having to beg! The world has no justice I tell you. Ohh! Does this mean that Raphael is Lucy's rival for Gaby's love? Please update this! I'm dying to find out what happens next!

Wow! Very good. Was Gaby expelled just because of dictating the texts or did he go down with Lucifer? If he went down because of the texts does that mean that it was during that time that he and Lucy got close? And then Gaby betrayed him? Oh how awefull! Poor Lucy! Please keep up with this story. I'm going to give it a plug on all of my other accounts and tell me friends to read it as well. Please continue, I'd like nothing more than to read more. Think of what a nice Christmas gift it would be, and not only that, but it would be a nice gift for Lucifer too to cheer him up over there not being a Lucifermas.

it's gret ou should update it though.

Now this I really liked, took me a minute to realise who Lucy was but then I felt like an idiot when I worked it out! It's really descriptive, it flows brilliantly and the plot seems to have genuine potential- I hope to read more soon!