Beautiful, but it makes never want to go fishing again. Poor fishy!

lvoe it brlat hwo yu can wirt ein such detial about salmon the desciritpn is brlat nad v professional in a way it kind of wel for me at least riases awareness about fish and the fact they suffer and could rmeind the reader that it is wrong fishing because they are humans too (ok that last bit was a joke but they are in a way)

is this really about the fish? even, if so, really excellent. superbly done.

I don't think this actually means anything, but I'm pretty sure I like it nonetheless. Get rid of the title within the file, it's redundant and takes away from the concise nature of the haiku.