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| Not Quite Dry Eyed 2005-04-17 ch 1,  | abusegreat poem...great job...i'm srry about that whole plz r&r thing i just found out that a lot of people don't review people who review the and i always do so don't take offense cuz i say it on all mine and i always review people who review my but yeah great job...keep writing 4 eva and always Scarred Heart |
| Owl 2005-03-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseAnother great poem. One actual error I found, "And greet those, like me, that have fell", it would be "who" not "that" since your talking about a person. Otherwise, the ryhme was great, very powerful. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-03-28 ch 1, | abuseLovely. |
| Zephyr Zaelza 2005-03-28 ch 1, | abuseThat one took my breath away, just the words you use, wow, it's just too amazing to descibe, I can't wait to read anything else you post :D Keep it up, you have talent!-Zephyr Zaelza |