I have not read your "Defenders of the Forest" series at all, so I have no idea who San'Loowen really is. However, I absolutely loved this story and I am shocked that no one has ever reviewed it! It is a great piece of fiction: well-crafted, enlightening, and above all--creative. I was sad to see it end so, but all good stories must end somehow.

I only saw a few minor misspellings, but overall this is perfect. You did a marvelous job with the dates and entries as a whole.

At your age you have a marvellous talent. Great job. I'll be visiting your site as soon as I finish this to read more of your great work.