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| Squirrel 2005-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseGo Lisa! *Dances* |
| cherise 2005-04-16 ch 1, anon. | abusemy gosh! I love Aunt Lisa now! haha, I was wondering, while reading Telran, what the heck she possibly could've said to that vile hearted woman to make her cough up the address, but that was priceless! Esp. what she said to his Dad!! She rox! and so do you!! |
| K.T. Wood 2005-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhoo, go Lise! update Telran soon! Go Lisa Go Lisa *walks away chanting* |
| moonjuniper 2005-04-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseahahaha. great, just great. luved the story. aunt lisa is one heck of a woman, isn't she? she rocks. :D great ending too, with her little speech to alex's dad. and then the last line, "i can't wait." ah luv it. does jason suspect that she knows? hmmn. anyways thanx for the awesome side story and i can't wait to find out what happens next in telran...until then :) |
| dyers-eve 2005-04-02 ch 1,  | abuseTough lady indeed. Update the main story lol. I'm a little obsessed with it now, possibly, maybe. |
| Aidan Montague 2005-03-30 ch 1, | abuseOH YEAH! You did say something about the special didn't you? I can wait until after the main story's completed...I mean, after all, I wouldn't want it to ruin the story for us or anything! But I can still hardly wait! That was good. I quite enjoyed that. In fact, I now have another reason why I like this Lisa lady. She makes me laugh. Even though what she was saying probably wasn't all supposed to be funny...it was still good. I especially like where she told the minister off and then just climbed into the taxi. That was good. I can just see the minister staring at her as she continues on. Shocked at what she'd just said...That image is quite funny. I hope that the boys get to be happy together. I might cry if they don't... |
| r.mai 2005-03-30 ch 1, | abusewow ... go jason's aunt lisa! Xd;; |
| Naomi Schemer 2005-03-29 ch 1, | abuseI absolutly love spring break. I really did wonder what Lisa said, so I'm happy you wrote this. It also gives some insight on how her mind works, and what kind of person she is, which is great, considering it seems like she's going to play a bigger part in the story from now on. Good job, and I definatly like her character. |
| MooseDeEvita 2005-03-29 ch 1, | abusewow, you just jumped right in there *cheers Lisa on* yay, that's what I'd have liked to say to them, especially his dad |
| Ember Silverly 2005-03-29 ch 1, | abuseIt appears to me that you've forgotten the first rule of writing a bit in this chapter...show, don't tell. You repeated a lot that Aunt Lisa is very lady-like...show, don't tell Kat. Really, a neat side story. So, Jason's parents now know...I love those two... |
| rainbowskye 2005-03-28 ch 1, | abuseI like her.. she has a way with words.. and is, of course, lady-like ^_^ It's cool to see what she said, and the reactions/interactions of them both |