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| Moon-Chaser 2005-04-03 ch 1,  | abuseGreat poem, I could feel the raw emotion that was coming from this poem. I feel like this too at times, like there is no air coming, that I'm gasping for breath. Keep it up. |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2005-03-29 ch 1, | abusesad, touching, and heartfelt. all those seem to be in every poem I've read. I enjoy your work and admire it. The rhyming and flow is just great. very good work. ~Rueben~ |
| aquila scuro 2005-03-29 ch 1, | abuseAwesome! Very fast-paced and evocative(to me, anyway...), and basically very neat! I like!And, thankee a heap for reviewing my poem, it'd be great if you'd review some more! |
| A.Solitaire 2005-03-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseCreepy, I Like it, that was really intense. especially the "on my knees clutching my throat fighting for air" part that was awesome. you're gonna have to slow down your showin me up. |