Awesome.

This was an awesome story! I really really really loved Max haha! But seriously, I love when stories have pets in them that have distinct personalities! I feel like everyone's interactions with him just made them seem more endearing themselves! Also, I adore Sam and the fact that he's not blond. I don't know why but it's just been nailed into my head that all characters with sunny dispositions need to be blond. I was happily surprised that he wasn't. And I know that that is such a stupid comment to make, but it really did stand out for me lol

Of course, I adored Clyde as well. His resistance to Sam made for some wonderful drama and reading :) Anyway, loved the story! Awesome writing style, killer characters, and sweet plot!

Rob was funny... well clyde's reaction to him and i absolutly love max. great story.

Love this chapter :D

I am so fascinated by Clyde! Lovehim :)

He hates fish but he never tells mom. He never has the heart to tell her what he always tells me: ‘It tastes like **.’
-- Love his Grandpa! Hilarious :)

Ha :) Love Clyde and his shopping sabotage!

And the names of your chapters by the way :)

At risk of him hating me, Max does sound cute :)

Love reading from this characters perspective :)

Brilliant. I really liked Clyde's character development and just the whole story =D

That story was great! Nice ending, too! Gah, I wish I could make an intelligent review! I'm just rambling! All I can say is, thanks for the thrill!

this was amazing. and clyde? wow i didn't think i'd meet a character with MORE snark than ME. *wipes tears of laughter* anywho, kudos!

No offence or anything but u made Clyde out to be so complex, what with how bitter and cynical he is, yet you are making it terribly easy to figure him out. I mean about five chapters ago it was so obvious what was going to happen, i mean with the whole " lonley guy shuts everyone out to protect himself, which makes him bitter, but then out of no where he meets someone that changes him for the better" (*eneter sarcasm*).

I dont know, it just seems unrealistic that someone who has been the way Clyde has been for his WHOLE life could just change so rapidly in the space of about two weeks (thats only with what ive read so far, i can imagine just how much he'll cange in future chapters. lol). Ever heard of the saying "Old habits die hard". People like their comfort zones and its hard to leave what your use to doing

Im not saying that I dont want Clyde and Sam to be together i just mean that u made everything too quick. If your going to make a complex character, there should be a complex way that he changes... to me it barley even seems like Clyde is resisting against the change , what with going out, letting andrea take his keys, walk his DOG,ect... maybe if it was over a longer period of time or even if he wouldve resisted more it would've seemed more realistic.

Oh and this isnt a flame or anything, im not saying u cant write or anything like that. I really like the plot and u obviously write well...i just think it could've been better if it wasnt rushed. :(

I kinda regret that I didn't review in every chapter, since I had quite a few things to say, but what can I do now? I know you wrote this story long ago, but I think it still deserves reviews C:

Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us!It was a truly great story, so different than the ones I'm used to and very original. Reading the first chapter I wasn't so sure if there was any possibility of me liking the protagonist (Angry McBitter *snickers*) but I'm glad I kept reading coz he turned out to be an awesome character...maybe some kind of an anti-hero! Your writing skills and characterisations are amazing, and I laughed so much at some scenes(like the phone call between Clyde and Sam talking about...cake)!

The end was lovely and very fitting...I like how Clyde didn't change that very much. So, again, thank you for sharing this story, it has been wonderful reading it!

DEAR YOU ( I FORGOT UR NAME ) THIS IS A GREAT STORY ! DID YOU STOP RIGHT THERE SO EVERYONW WAS KEPT WAITING ? DOES THAT GUY REALLY HAVE CANCER ?